Overall I thought this was a good effective short film. I like the narrative structure you used as you cut back to the clips of the night before which refer to what is being said in the dialogue. I think your soundtrack was good and adding to the tone of the film and you had a good range of shots throughout. I especially liked the 2 scenes (supermarket and train station) where you used editing to make it look like a CCTV camera and it worked well as it looked like a real image a CCTV camera would see in the end. One thing I wouls say is that at time the image was just slightly too dark and so you couldn't see very well what was happening on camera as could of done if perhaps there was some extra lighting. Overall I thought this film was really well done and I liked the twist in your narrative at the end that threw where people thought the narrative was going, off track and added a sense of humour to it as well.
Overall I thought this was a good effective short film. I like the narrative structure you used as you cut back to the clips of the night before which refer to what is being said in the dialogue. I think your soundtrack was good and adding to the tone of the film and you had a good range of shots throughout. I especially liked the 2 scenes (supermarket and train station) where you used editing to make it look like a CCTV camera and it worked well as it looked like a real image a CCTV camera would see in the end. One thing I wouls say is that at time the image was just slightly too dark and so you couldn't see very well what was happening on camera as could of done if perhaps there was some extra lighting. Overall I thought this film was really well done and I liked the twist in your narrative at the end that threw where people thought the narrative was going, off track and added a sense of humour to it as well.
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