At the moment, this doesn't really look like a film poster. The title hides Bradley's eyes, which would rarely happen in a poster, even if the issue of identity is being highlighted. The cast needs to be integrated with the text on the passport, and the logos at the bottom are far too prominent. Lots missing here, and lots of work to do. Print it off to look at more closely, and get another draft up there tomorrow if possible. You are getting very close to the wire!
At the moment, this doesn't really look like a film poster. The title hides Bradley's eyes, which would rarely happen in a poster, even if the issue of identity is being highlighted. The cast needs to be integrated with the text on the passport, and the logos at the bottom are far too prominent. Lots missing here, and lots of work to do. Print it off to look at more closely, and get another draft up there tomorrow if possible. You are getting very close to the wire!
ReplyDeleteStill no improvement here!! You are all risking losing marks here.
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